Here's what chapter 2 looks like! (Sorry, but I'm really excited at being able to do this. Forgive me for posting every chapter up (it will happen!). It's the only way I can show my visible writing progress to you all.
(hopes I don't put followers off! But today is Muse Day. She has to be set loose sometimes.
See how there is more green here? Turns out in chapter 1 a pov was better suited for a different character. And in first draft Abidah's voice/pov is nice and strong. At least for this chapter.