Friday, 12 February 2010

Inescapable Ties Chapter 3 first highlight edit.


Not so much green here. There's a lot to change. It's flung up a plot issue. I've got my thinking cap on. I'm trying to spur Muse to find a solution. I can't say she's being quick on her feet.

2 comments:

Amy Allgeyer Cook said...

What do the colors mean?

Yunaleska said...

Oops! I'd included them on one of the others....

Green = keeping material. It might get moved or tweaked a tiny bit, but definitely keeping.

Orange = needs tweaking, maybe replacing, or even putting in a different wip.

Red = cut, delete, nuke these words. They are BAD!

turquoise = beta reader #1's comments

yellow = beta reader #2's comments

pink = my comments. Ideas for the current scene, or even a point in the plot which doesn't happen for much later on.