Friday, 12 February 2010

Inescapable Ties Chapter 1 first highlight edit.

Here's a picture of what chapter one currently looks like.

Green = text keeping, with no or very minor tweaks
Orange = major tweaks (although its a bit hard to distinguish orange from yellow in the pic)
Red = Nuke! Delete! Remove
Yellow & turquoise = beta comments.
Pink = my comments, sometimes random points for later on in the story.

The next round of editing (not today) will be removing text that isn't needed, in preparation for the rewrite.

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