Wednesday, 17 February 2010

Inescapable Ties Chapter 4 first highlight edit.


In my newly carved writing time, I completed chapter 4! With highlighting edits. Okay, so I'd done a page or two previously, but I've worked hard in the last hour. See how pretty it is! (more green this time, yay!) For explanation on colours:

green = keep with no/minor changes
orange = change (or put somewhere else in the story
red = delete! cut! axe!
pink = my comments
yellow & turquoise = beta reader comments.

2 comments:

Amy Allgeyer Cook said...

woo hoo! look at all that green! :)

Yunaleska said...

Not so much green in the following chapters