I have summarised all the chapters of the first version. 17 chapters. Just under 40k. *wails*.
Revision = major expansion. Reading it, I see where the issues are. There is virtually no description anyway. There are a fair amount of scenes which can be expanded, have more scenes connecting to them. All is definitely not lost. Some scenes are most decidedly confusing. I have my lovely beta-reader's notes to work with too. Progress shall be made!
Another day though. Wiped out now, and its gaming time.