Thanks to an 1hr and 10 min detour (of a journey which should have taken 10 mins - yes I had satnav. No, I've discovered I'm not a homing pigeon), I've come up with a twist for Termion! Well, not really a twist. More of a conflict for Tarc. Who had no conflict. And, as a main POV character, he needed more than danger for Jinna. So yeah...him and the Count will not be getting along, which will fuel Jinna's feelings of self-doubt...:D %-) heeheehee.
Hope to create that twist tonight. After book review, if I have energy. That extra driving has worn me out!