Thursday, 18 June 2009

Editing Termion, post # 7

I'm on chapter 7! I finished chapter 6, and have written the first scene in chapter 7. There are 3 scenes, one with Jinna, then Tarc, then back to Jinna.

Oh my word my stomach was sloshing around as I edited the first of 2 or 3 bad dreams which Jinna has. I've had my share of decapitation thank you. Methinks I won't be using it in a wip for a while.
Hopefully if I make myself feel sick the writing might be having an effect on my beta reader. I gues its worse cos I see it all like a film in my head.

Sorry beta-reader, sorry. I know this isn't your thing. It's not all gross, I promise! Tarc makes meringues :) The Warden gets hit round the head. (great moment).

I love Termion!

Remind me tomorrow night when I get back to editing how much I love it.

2 comments:

Danyelle said...

Now I'm dying to read this! Well, er, I suppose it doesn't help that I'm very squeamish. >.<

Icy Roses said...

Haha, I agree with Danyelle. Now my curiosity is peaked.