Inescapable Ties Chapter 16 first highlight edit.

I was pretty tired as I edited this, but that didn't prevent me from deciding to heavily tweak most of this penultimate (or what was the penultimate) chapter. With the new plot changes, a lot of this needs changing. I like the sentiment behind some of the words, but they can't remain as they are to make sense in the story. My Muse has an awful lot of work ahead of her. But I think she'll get there, if she keeps herself fuelled up for writing!