Saturday, 20 February 2010

Inescapable Ties Chapter 10 first highlight edit.

Although there is a lot of orange here, it isn't bad news. Half of the events which happen in this chapter are now happening in a later chapter, due to several plot changes. The paragraphs in orange will be heavily amended, but they will still be in the story. So I wasn't so disheartened by the level of orange here as I have been in previous chapters.

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